Stylesheet
for Humanities Papers
Introduction
Paper
writing has its own conventions. It is as well to learn these now as to
need to correct bad habits later. The style I recommend is that outlined
in Kate L. Turabian, A Manual for Writers of Term Papers, Theses, and
Dissertations, 6th ed. (Chicago: University of Chicago Press, 1996).
I Typing and Presentation
Papers
must be typed, double-spaced. Use 1 inch margins all round. Use 10
or 12 pt. type. Staple the paper. Do not use plastic covers or
binders. Keep a copy other than the one you submit (professors' cars
have been stolen before now).
Text
should be double-spaced (unlike in this handout). Long quotations, however,
should be single spaced and indented five spaces. There is no gap between
paragraphs.
II Title Page
The
following information should be included on the title page of all papers.
* Your name
* The course name and number (EDUC247)
* The lecturer's name (Katina Manko)
* The title of the paper
* Any epithets you want to use
* Nothing else
III The Text
Good
grammar is expected of all students. Those new to writing papers should
pay special attention to the following, lack of attention to which represents
90% of grammatical and stylistic errors seen in student papers:-
i) Spelling
Spelling
should follow the generally accepted conventions. If you don't have one,
buy a good dictionary.
ii) Correct Use of Tenses
In
general refer to actions people did in the past in the past tense
(example: "Educators used the New England Primer in the Colonial Era.")
Refer to quotations from authors in the present tense, even if the
author you are referring to is a historical person (example: "Joel Spring
[a modern writer] argues that education is a system of ideological
and cultural control.")
iii) Use of Apostrophes
Apostrophes
are not used in the plurals of words (example: "telephones." not
"telephone's.") Apostrophes are used to indicate possession of one
thing by another (example "the woman's hat.") If the word that possesses
is already plural the apostrophe goes after the "s" that was added to make
the word plural (for instance, "The Students' Association" means the association
belonging to many students, but "the student's association" would mean
some association pertaining to one particular student.)
iv) Its and It's
"Its"
= indication of possession, like "his" or "her."
e.g.
"the book's cover" = "its cover."
"It's"=
contraction for "it is."
v) Capitalization
Capitalize:
1. The first word in a sentence.
2. Proper nouns (i.e. names).
3. Words such as "King," "President," only when referring to a particular
person.
4. Words in titles, but not non-initial conjunctions, prepositions, or
articles.
vi) Conditional Verbs I
"He
would have been elected," not "He would of been elected."
"She
could have done it," not "She could of done it."
vii) Conditional Verbs II
It
has been very common to use phrases such as "If he would have helped
her, she would now be safe," but this is grammatical nonsense and does
not do what it intends, which is to make a conditional statement about
the past. Literally the phrase as it stands means "If he had wanted
to help her, she would now be safe." The phrase should be "If he
had helped her, she would now be safe."
viii Split Infinitives
It
is probably a lost cause to argue against them, but too many split infinitives
are a sign of an uneducated writer. The infinitive of a verb is that part
which expresses the meaning alone, for example, "to go," "to sing," "to
be." In English, the infinitive is marked by the word "to," but in most
other languages the infinitive is just one word, for instance aller,
penser (French), gehen, kaufen (German), cantar,
amar (Spanish). For this reason, it has long been considered bad
style in English to "split infinitives" with adverbs. Instead of writing
"to quickly go," or "to finally sing," you should write "to go quickly,"
or "finally to sing."
ix) Use of First Person Pronouns
When
writing formal papers only use "I" and "me" when it becomes confusing to
avoid them. A paper is not meant to "sound" like a letter to a friend or
a diary entry.
x) "Feel" and "Believe"
These
words are massively overused by students. Your feelings are
not relevant to a paper, it's your thoughts that count. When writing
about historical figures, you only know what they "felt" if they left diaries
or told someone else their feelings. Unless you can cite such information,
do not state that a historical figure "felt" something. Also do not use
"felt" when you mean "thought." These comments apply to "believe" in a
less stringent manner.
xi) "Being that"
"Being
that he was King of France, ...." is better rendered "Since
he was..,." or "Because he was...," or "When he was..."
xii) Words to Avoid
"Incredible,"
"Unbelievable," "Literally," "People," "They." Always check that these
words really mean something when you use them.
xiii Passive Constructions
It
is bad style to use passive constructions, or more concretely, passive
constructions lead to bad style.
Here
are some examples:-
"Sugar was boycotted by women."
"The White House had been burned down."
"America was discovered."
“Jim is engaged in a kicking action against Bob.”
All
these sentences would be stronger and more informative if the person doing
the lynching/burning/discovering was put in the picture.
"Women boycotted sugar."
"The British burned down the White House."
"Columbus (never knew) he discovered America."
“Jim kicked the snot out of Bob.”
IV Citations and Notes
You
must indicate from where you are making any quotations you use in your
paper. It is also important to cite the source of arguments and ideas when
you take them from a textbook or other author.